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Hi Fredrick,It's great to see that you can embed a video onto your blog and that you considered what was positive and the improvements that you could make. If you had to do another persuasive speech would you stick with this topic, or do another one?- Miss Percy
nice work Fredrick
Wow you did a cool speech
Nice Job Fredrick!I like the way you used eye contact. Next time you could maybe speak a bit louder. Ka Pai!
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ReplyDeleteHi Fredrick,
ReplyDeleteIt's great to see that you can embed a video onto your blog and that you considered what was positive and the improvements that you could make.
If you had to do another persuasive speech would you stick with this topic, or do another one?
- Miss Percy
nice work Fredrick
ReplyDeleteWow you did a cool speech
ReplyDeleteNice Job Fredrick!
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used eye contact. Next time you could maybe speak a bit louder.
Ka Pai!
Shot man
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