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Thursday, 27 August 2015

My Speech.

This Term we have been working on our speech. My speech is about should we speak in our language.



     Improvements: I wasn't loud enough on this video.
Positive: I had e`ye contact.

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  2. Hi Fredrick,

    It's great to see that you can embed a video onto your blog and that you considered what was positive and the improvements that you could make.

    If you had to do another persuasive speech would you stick with this topic, or do another one?

    - Miss Percy

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  3. nice work Fredrick

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  4. Wow you did a cool speech

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  5. Nice Job Fredrick!
    I like the way you used eye contact. Next time you could maybe speak a bit louder.
    Ka Pai!

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